The Maycomb Tribune
Negro convicted of rape tries to escape, Shot dead.
Maycomb, Alabama. Tom Robinson, convicted of Rape barely a week ago was shot dead while attempting to escape from the Enfield Prison Farm yesterday. Robinson had rushed towards the perimeter fence around the Exercise field, and had almost made it past the fence. Ignoring warning shots, he was shot as he reached the top of the fence.
A prison officer, who declined to be named, said, "He was running so fast, if he had two whole hands, the nigger would have made it. It was a close one. "
Robinson had been convicted of raping a Mayella Ewell, 19, in a much observed trial. Despite the best efforts of Mr Atticus Finch, the lawyer appointed by the state, Robinson had been convicted of his crime and sent to Enfield Prison Farm pending the outcome of his appeal. Before the appeal could be heard, Robinson tried to escape.
When interviewed, Mr Finch stated, "I didn't expect this to happen... I told Tom that we had a good chance of overturning the judgement..."
A Mr Ewell, the father of the rape victim, was not surprised on hearing the news. Mr Ewell stated, "These niggers (sic) have it coming to them. Living around here, devaluing my property, they'll all get what's coming to them. The Electric Chair is too Good for them."
I found the structure of the article to be very realistic. It feels as if I just saw it in the Times magazine. (good job on that part). However I thought that you did not bring out the elements of the Maycomb town. The Maycomb town is as we know mostly racist. Perhaps you could have, taken the stand of a journalist with a stronger sense of racism against blacks. That would have certainly made the article even more realistic and fitting to TKAM's context.
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The realism of the structure in the article itself is present. I would say that it feels very professional and intellectual. However what is lacking is the unique elements of the Maycomb county. You take the role of one of Maycomb's journalists. As we know Maycomb is mostly racist against blacks, perhaps you could reflect the racism in your style of writing to connect the article into the context of Maycomb more smoothly.
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