Reflections on term two test results
For my Term Two Essay, I believe that I could still have done better. This is that most of my sentence structure was repeated. For example, I repeated the word “used” very frequently, thus making the essay quite dry since the essay structure was very uniform.
Also, I failed to use linking words in between each paragraph. This resulted in my essay having a slightly disjointed feel.
However, I think I did well by using several examples in my essay from several areas, especially current examples, such as the middle east protests (See below post of essay). Furthermore, apart from using several examples, I also made them link to my topic sentence of each paragraph.
Therefore, I feel that I can still improve. I aim to improve by practicing other essays under exam conditions.
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